The Rain forest waterfall

[Rachel]

Zeke sits in his cave, his parents sleeping in the back. He kicks rock and hears a rustling of bushes outside. He gets up and glares. A pikachu walks out, looking weak. Zeke watches as it walks into the cave, unknowing that it is occupied. Zeke grabs it and picks it up. He looks at it square in the face. Pikachu looks scared. He says after awhile, "What are you doing here? You look pretty weak..." The pikachu only says,"Please,...Help..." The pikachu faints. He Puts it in his bed and covers it with a blanket.

[Rachel]

He looks out of the cave. He walked out and started looking for oran berries for the pikachu.

[Jespeon]

"ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The sound echoed round the rainforest. A large red eye glinted out from the bushes. "State your business!" shouted a strong, fierce, feminine voice.

[Rachel]

Zeke hears the roar and snickers. He roars back. He sees the red eye and attacks with iron tail. "My business is none of yours!"He growls. He flaps his wings and lifts off quickly,snickering.

[Jespeon]

The tail missed as the eyes owner dodged it. "Coward,£ the voice said as the creature stalked away. She had been waiting for a good fight too...

[Rachel]

She flies low over the land, searching for oran berries. He gets tired and lands slowly. He might as well take a rest. He lays down but cant sleep over a strands watery sound. He peeks through a bush and sees a beautiful waterfall with pokemon hanging around it. He keeps watching carefully.

[Jespeon]

At the bottom of the waterfall lay a beautifull, golden Shinx. Well ok it was lay down for a few seconds before leaping up and trying to play with the nearby Delcatty. Not too far away stood a Zangoose who seemed to be keeping guard. And on top of the waterfall stood a Luxray, her eyes looking over everything. Her red eyes looked familiar...

[Rachel]

Zeke decides it's safe and appears out of the bush. He is instantly spotted by the luxray. It hops down and growls. "You must defeat me to be here!"he says. Zeke snickers. "Fine by me." The other pokemon clear out in preparation for the battle.

[Jespeon]

(The luxray is my charater and so are the others - apart from the Zangoose, thats Handytanks but I'm setting up a scene so I needed to put him in there - and they are all part of a new pride I've created. You cant control them. The luxray is called Leonna and I control her not you.)

[~Handy~]

Dill looked silently around the place. Nothing bad was happing today. He found two dead tauros just laying they full of meat while he was hunting. He dident have to kill today. That was good. (For him at least, he dosent like too kill for food that much.)

[Rachel]

zeke prepares for the battle by tightening the band on his head. He roars triumphantly while the luxray sits there calmly. "wait a minute, whos gonna be the judge?" said zeke. "it cant be any of these pokemon who like you."

[~Handy~]

In the bushs, pops out a lucario. "I'll be the judge. I havent seen a good fight in a while." He says loudly.

[Rachel]

Zeke nods. "I'm fine with that" He says. He waits for the judge to give the start.

[~Handy~]

The locario looked into the air and said. "When I use screech, the battle will begin. SSSSccccccRRRRRRRRRREEeeeeeeeeeCCCCCCCCCcccccccccHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH The battle has now began."

[Rachel]

Zeke roars. He flies up into the air and uses irontail. The luxray easily dodges and uses thunderbolt. Zeke uses hyper beam and luxray is hit with hyper beam and thunderbolt. The luxray tumble backwaord and gets up weakened. He uses double team and zeke uses hyper beam on all of them. the luxray is blown into the air and falls to the ground. It is now fainted. Zeke wins the battle.

[Jespeon]

(Do you understand English? I'll speak S-L-O-W-L-Y so you can understand me. Y-O-U C-A-N-T C-O-N-T-R-O-L M-Y C-H-A-R-A-C-T-E-R-S! T-H-E L-U-X-R-A-Y I-S M-Y C-H-A-R-A-C-T-E-R! I S-A-Y W-H-A-T I-T D-O-E-S, N-O-T Y-O-U!!! Did you understand that? Also you cant say you win the battle coz you havent even given my character a chance and its up to me if the luxray dodges it, you cant control it!!! God, did you even read the rules before you started? This is pathetic! I already told you once didnt I?)

[Rachel]

no no no. Its a random luxray. not all luxrays are urs. duh. i made it.

[Jespeon]

(Well why did you say he was instantly spotted by the luxray then? That means your referring to the one I set up. ANd you said it hopped down meaning it must have been off the ground like my luxray on top of the waterfall. And it didnt help your case that you didnt reply to the other post I put)

[Rachel]

oh sorry. lets do the battle all over again.(just make sure i win the base idea is for me to get into the waterfall area)

[Jespeon]

(Then ask. Not everything needs to be a battle. Ask Leonna ((the luxray)) to go in and she might let you. And never mind sorry for getting angry)

[Rachel]

k

[Jespeon]

you start then

[Rachel]

Zeke looks at the pool and blinks. He turns around and sees a flygon heading towards him. The flygon says "Hi. I'm Jake. Nice to meet you."

[Jespeon]

The luxray, Leonna had her blood red orb fixed on the duo talking below her. They were stood at the edge of her territory and one wrong move and they would be in her land. Ths means they probably wouldnt live to see another day. She smirked, almost daring them to come closer...

[Rachel]

Zeke peers up to the sky and sees the luxray. He figures out it must be the owner of the waterful. He approaches carefully.

[Jespeon]

Leonna leaps down speedily and lands within millimetres of Zeke. "State your business or leave," she says.

[Rachel]

Zeke says "I was just looking for oran berrys for an injured friend and i found your waterfall and pool. I mean no harm." He blinks.

[Jespeon]

Leonna nodded and stepped aside but kept her eyes glued in Zeke.

[Rachel]

(Uh,What do i do now?)

[Jespeon]

(Go find the berries? Thats why you came isnt it?)