Grovyle's Character

[†Grovyle†]

Here is all of my characters....NEW characters.

[†Grovyle†]

Character's name:Omni A.K.A The Gentle Rogue
Species: Corrupt Latios
Age:Adult
Sex:Male
Description:
A black Latios with a yellow ring. (Sprite coming later today.)
Personality:
Omni thinks that he is intellectually superior to most beings due to his wide knowledge of Erymire and what revolves around it, but he knows many who match him. He is a gentleman, and a rebel at the same time. He leaves some chance of surrvival when he is feeling very generous. He plans to join Zilla on her conquest to control Erymire.
History:
Not much is known about the Latios but he has only one minion and that minion is also his son.

character's name: Yuki
species:Riolu/Absol
age{in actual years or in general life phases}:Late Childhood
sex:Female
Description:
(Made by a good friend of Grover's.)
personality:Yuki is one of a very curious specimen. She loves to explore deep caverns and caves. Unlike most Riolu, she has control over Aura and can use to the extent of it covering one foot or hand and loves to pick a fight.
history:Yuki's mother and father abandoned her because was hybrid and they wanted normal children. She was found by a pack of nomad Absol and she was accepted into their pack. Soon after turning 4 years old, human years, she accquired a craving for adventures so she ran away to explore the greatest places of Erymire. Yuki is also the founder of an uprising team of strays called ' The Renegade' that will explore unique places, discover new things, and assist those in need.

Name: Vulcan
Species: Vulpix
Age: Adolescent
Sex: Male
Description: Black and silver Vulpix.( Made by me)
Personality: Vulcan is the shy, yet playful type of teen. He won't start up a conversation without being spoken to first and typically uses short sentences. If he does feel comfortable, he'll slacken up a bit and become the fun, loving fur ball he was made.
History: Vulcan lived inside the Savannas with his mom up to Adolescent. She scolded him for sitting on the river while the sun was setting with a female. He strayed off from his tribe since then.

[Jespeon]

I've allowed this character =] So he's not breaking the rules =]

[Clif]

Do you literally mean that he "is intellectually superior to all beings"? 'Cause if so that just screams a potential for powerplaying and metagaming. I would recommend that you slightly alter this statement, I do not mind a highly intelligent character; but a blantant statement that places your character upon a pedestal puts me at unease.

I'm sorry if I'm sounding a little aggressive or like an ass, but I've seen characters like this before and I'm just voicing my opinion based upon past experiences.

[†Grovyle†]

Nah, its okay. I was sleepy. I'll fix it.

[Clif]

Awesome, thanks for the change

[†Grovyle†]

No problem.